I took my daughter
To the graveyard
On a day without funerals
She totted up
The spans of the dead
From their epitaphs
Then clambered an oak
Twenty feet above the ground
My heart thumped
A poem called
"More Years Gone
Then Remain"
And the crows
Gabbled and cawed
My daughter and I
Built a graveyard
In the yard
With gauze props
Styrofoam and
Black lights
I clambered up our oak
Twenty feet above the ground
And clutched the bark
Till my muscles
Knotted
My heart banged a
Measure called
"You Are Fragile
As A Mouse"
And my Girl cawed
Back at the crows
This morning I saw
Someone thrashing
In the road
A mouse
Mortally damaged
But struggling still
One by one with
Avarice in their
Oil drop eyes
Crows landed
I drove around
Glad my daughter was
At school
My heart sang a
Dirge called
"You Really Could
Do More"
And the crows
Circled up to
Finish things
Comments
Neil McKay
October 28, 2015
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Awesome poem
I love this poem. It's very well written. Especially the repeating "chorus" of "My heart..." Are you submitting these anywhere? Because you could definitely publish this.
Michael Mayhew
October 28, 2015
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Thank you!
No, I haven't submitted any poems anywhere. Never even thought about it (although for many years i used to submit short stories to magazines). Before I stumbled onto this website (thanks Ben!) I almost never wrote poetry - but these days I am drawn to it.
I shall investigate. And thank you again for your kind words!
joshua mertz
October 28, 2015
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So Halloween...
Love this poem. So autumnal, so living on the edge of darkness. The veil between worlds in the earth and the trees and the true horror in the street in the light of day. Yeah. Moody. Excellent.